It´s okay, but I like your pictures with people of figures in them more. This one is a bit...uptight, a bit too controlled. The "My bedroom" piece had a bit more ACTION!!!! in it (for a still-life anyways).
I am trying to give you the valuable gift of constructive criticism here - if I would care less about your work I would just say "Cool work!" and leave it alone ;)
By the way, I forgot to comment on your "J" piece, which is brilliant. Merle came home from some kind of seminar and actually showed me some sign language. Apparently, the sign for "grandpa" is some moustache-stroking motion. And cooking is a simple stirring motion. Not as exciting as I thought.
I like the way the plant and is sitting in the space. Also the chunkiness of the legs on the stool makes it funner, and I think the title is funny. I likes a good title.
I would however need to see this beside a ruler to verify this is indeed only three inches.
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Wow 3 inches. That's small. It looks really good. What are the pictures in the back groung?
Mom
It´s okay, but I like your pictures with people of figures in them more. This one is a bit...uptight, a bit too controlled. The "My bedroom" piece had a bit more ACTION!!!! in it (for a still-life anyways).
I am trying to give you the valuable gift of constructive criticism here - if I would care less about your work I would just say "Cool work!" and leave it alone ;)
By the way, I forgot to comment on your "J" piece, which is brilliant. Merle came home from some kind of seminar and actually showed me some sign language. Apparently, the sign for "grandpa" is some moustache-stroking motion. And cooking is a simple stirring motion. Not as exciting as I thought.
Fred (who is too lazy to log in AGAIN)
Merle is doing social service with disabled people, just in case it sounds like I made this part up!
I'm not an artist, so I can't offer constructive criticism like Fred, but I do like the title quite a lot.
Cool work!
I like this one a lot - its got a lot going on, all the objects are like characters -- I don't think it needs any more action!
I like the way the plant and is sitting in the space. Also the chunkiness of the legs on the stool makes it funner, and I think the title is funny. I likes a good title.
I would however need to see this beside a ruler to verify this is indeed only three inches.
I love this, and I love the name of it too!
This is sweet little drawing. So cozy, wish I could enlarge it to see the lovely detail.
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